DoctaWho wrote:
Shadrach wrote:
DoctaWho wrote:
Shadrach wrote:
found one mistake(I think) and one clarity tweak in the rulebook. Sent email!
I currently have a list of 5 necessary changes and 3 suggested changes. Still 10 pages left to read. I'm quite impressed with the clarity of the rules though.
Care to share?
Sure, but my strikethrough and bold text don't show up nicely and I don't want to put in more time to edit my copy paste.
The italicized text explains what I think is wrong. The bold text is to help you locate what changed. The
Things that need to change
pg. 5 Then, take all Random Event cards,suffleshuffle them and place
them on the side of your play space or in the box.
pg. 7 I believe the following icon is wrong. Should it be the health icon? If your [energy icon] is already at 0, lose 1[energy icon][health icon]? instead.
pg. 11Fold Stack all revealed Locations into a pile and place the “Revealed
Locations” separator card on top of them.
pg. 12 Then, all Party members check to make sure they’re not using
more than one Item with each of the following keywords
pg. 14 This is in the combat section, so it should be referring to combat cards. This Bonus Key allows you to play additionalDiplomacy Combat
cards during step 2 of your Activation (see: Playing Cards).
Ignore this Key when playing your firstDiplomacy Combat card in the
Activation.
pg. 5 Then, take all Random Event cards,
them on the side of your play space or in the box.
pg. 7 I believe the following icon is wrong. Should it be the health icon? If your [energy icon] is already at 0, lose 1
pg. 11
Locations” separator card on top of them.
pg. 12 Then, all Party members check to make sure they’re not using
more than one Item with each of the following keywords
pg. 14 This is in the combat section, so it should be referring to combat cards. This Bonus Key allows you to play additional
cards during step 2 of your Activation (see: Playing Cards).
Ignore this Key when playing your first
Activation.
Recommended minor edits
pg. 4 Set aside the 80 Combat and Diplomacy cardswith of a color
thatmatches match the color of your Character Tray.
pg. 4 There’s a total of 50 basic Combat and Diplomacy cards that share the color with your Character Tray, and 30 advanced Combat and Diplomacy cards
thatadditionaly additionally have your Character’s name above the card title.
pg. 11 The left quotation marks around You Are Dying are lower but should be upper ones in the following sentence: If your falls to 0 at any point of the game, attach the „You Are Dying” card to your Character Tray and immediately Escape any current Encounter
pg. 4 Set aside the 80 Combat and Diplomacy cards
that
pg. 4 There’s a total of 50 basic Combat and Diplomacy cards that share the color with your Character Tray, and 30 advanced Combat and Diplomacy cards
that
pg. 11 The left quotation marks around You Are Dying are lower but should be upper ones in the following sentence: If your falls to 0 at any point of the game, attach the „You Are Dying” card to your Character Tray and immediately Escape any current Encounter
Edit: I strikethrough all the errors I saw and bold texted in the correct words/suggestions. If it's hard to read, I can try and find an easier way to display my edits.
Edit 2: Bah, I just manually went through to add back in the text formatting.
Have you sent in these issues? I've hit them all in my list, but if I can cut it down to reduce redundancy on their end I'd like to.